This story lost me at the second chapter.....

Maggre February 2, 2020 9:30 pm

I like, can’t understand what is even happening or the narrative....

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    Nanas09 February 2, 2020 10:36 pm

    The chapters are out of order go by chapters on title page and it makes a little more sense

    Maggre February 3, 2020 12:23 am
    The chapters are out of order go by chapters on title page and it makes a little more sense Nanas09

    No I just mean like, the first chapter starts with the conflict, but also very rushingly introduces the rebirth aspect? And then the information in the second chapter is also rushed and confusing. My understanding is that she was an orphan found by the church and found to be very powerful and is now stuck at the church, but this chapter also introduces her friend and focuses really strongly on her backstory without much attention,or to tie to her current situation. Like I didn’t read past chapter 2 but I assume she’s trying to marry the blonde guy so she doesn’t have to stay at the church maybe? I just felt like the narrative’s sudden switch to her backstory after such a strong beginning with the immediate conflict was incredibly jarring....

    angix96 February 3, 2020 8:19 am
    No I just mean like, the first chapter starts with the conflict, but also very rushingly introduces the rebirth aspect? And then the information in the second chapter is also rushed and confusing. My understand... Maggre

    I felt the same way toward the first three chapters, but if you go on, you'll understand better. It's a very intriguing story, so give it a chance ;) on the first chapters the author did really rush things without a reason