Responses
Okay yeah, chapter 20 and I’m just feeling like whatever conflict will exist in this story is just brought on by the severe lack of information Estelle has, and for some reason the author doesn’t want to give the reader that information either (as foreshadowing, dramatic irony, or even just building the actual story) sadly think I’m gonna drop this.
...And I definitely appreciate the world/life building, but like, there is no obvious conflict yet. Like I’m sure this whole mixed race thing WILL be the conflict but like, definitely feeling like if the art wasn’t so good I’d have gotten bored at this point...back to it I guess