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I keep waiting for the story to finds its plot again. Jeanette just doesn't move the story at all and she's not at all interesting to read about.
Athy was always dynamic so even when not much happened in a chapter, it was fun just watching her character work.
I feel like even if action was happening to Jeanette or she was doing something to move the story I'd still be bored. She is the quintessential Mary Sue character, but she's upset because she's not getting the "everyone loves her" Mary Sue perks.
Claude sleeps through their meetings with Jeannette (I feel like Claude is all of us in those scenes).
The last few chapters have all been the same. Jeanette first meets claude. Then Jennette meets athy. Then she becomes jealous. Please can we move on.