I think I've figured out why I find this story so boring and why is seems so dragged out to me...
And it's that the whole story is basically just a long inner monologue from the mc. From start to finish. Going over every single detail.
It's so bland because ALL we get is mc's thoughts on everything and minimum amount of plot is expressed through actual dialogue or actions from the characters.
I believe this wt is based on a Web novel (correct me if I'm wrong). Many of these are written in first person. As such, it makes sense in the novel for everything to be described and explained from the mc's point of view. But this is a Webtoon. The tools used for story telling should be different! There is literally NO point in illustrating the story if the plot is still only told in mc's inner monologue and nothing else really gets added to it.
Yeah, that's how I feel about it. I'm done ranting now.
I think I've figured out why I find this story so boring and why is seems so dragged out to me...
And it's that the whole story is basically just a long inner monologue from the mc. From start to finish. Going over every single detail.
It's so bland because ALL we get is mc's thoughts on everything and minimum amount of plot is expressed through actual dialogue or actions from the characters.
I believe this wt is based on a Web novel (correct me if I'm wrong).
Many of these are written in first person.
As such, it makes sense in the novel for everything to be described and explained from the mc's point of view.
But this is a Webtoon. The tools used for story telling should be different!
There is literally NO point in illustrating the story if the plot is still only told in mc's inner monologue and nothing else really gets added to it.
Yeah, that's how I feel about it. I'm done ranting now.