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Well put! Couldn't agree more
Preach! I couldn't agree more. Especially how to plot completely left Jan's mind set on his past with his adopted parents and brother completely open ended! Even how that tied into his want of having 2 partners that's like always be by his side. One of which he never even said I love you to?!!
Okay, I'll just take Pray and leave now.
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My thoughts on the story overall (SPOILERS, kinda, if you haven't finished this yet)......
Seriously though, what was the plot of this story supposed to be exactly? As a disclaimer, I don't mind a good porn-without-plot story, but this webtoon couldn't quite decide which one it wanted to be. (●￣(ｴ)￣●)
It seems like things started off with the promise of a more complex development between Jan and Jamil. Complications of hugo vs. human society, unforrseen struggles of their relationships, etc. However, after their pseudo-break up, the story just went totally off the rails. I don't mind the polyamory relationship. However, there was this awkward tension the whole time between the two hugo partners. If it was played off as comedic banter due to their slight incompatibility, that would have been great. Yet, it ended up giving the impression that they were just disdainful of each other due to their possessiveness over Jan. I get that they're hugos and all, so they don't have the exact same feelings as humans, but it just made the atmosphere stressful. Jan could never quite be comfortable with one partner for fear the other would be bothered or jealous. Additionally, I feel like Jamil just ended up as the side piece to Jan, rather than an equal third partner of the relationship.