Hmm, all three characters are unlikable so far

BlueButterfly7 February 22, 2020 10:20 am

As it stands, all three characters are unlikable. The main character, because he completely lacks any will power to a girl who is completely selfish in her desires to have two men at once (not uncommon in some yaois I’ve read) but also because he has allowed himself to be in that position. Sadly, At this point he can blame himself. Sadly, He also has zero defense when it comes to Sunbae who is ALSO completely manipulating his love interest feelings because he “finds him attractive”. Which makes the sunbae a manipulative creep always smiling while having no regard for his love interest feelings and acting as if he doesn’t comprehend the word consent (again typical of yaoi)
Id love to see this develop into not so much the typical trope because quiet frankly I LOVE a good story and a beautifully written yaoi one at that. The art is gorgeous! But for the love of genuine good stories with a bit of angst and passion please MC have some balls (not those balls yet lol) just tell him “fuck it, tell everyone but if you think for a second that’ll make me fall for you because you think you can manipulate and blackmail me rather than you actually ever respecting my feelings then no I won’t like you!” and for the love of God MC have some actual self worth. This girls a thotbot and youre being hurt and manipulated by two people now. Me thinks that obviously Sunbae will win in the end sweeping MC off his feet, I just hope he listens at that point without the creepy smiles and gesters. It was cute at first but now he’s just being ignorant with his feelings Lol Here’s to hope.

Responses
    Yaoi Hungry February 22, 2020 10:23 am

    Amen, sister.

    Yunina February 22, 2020 3:58 pm

    Yes, I kinda hope this won't just go the usual "eh I have dreams & fantasies about Sunbae I actually love him".
    And I also the Sunbae has GOOD reasons to act this way

    BlueButterfly7 March 12, 2020 10:50 pm
    Yes, I kinda hope this won't just go the usual "eh I have dreams & fantasies about Sunbae I actually love him". And I also the Sunbae has GOOD reasons to act this way Yunina

    I totally agree. Like maybe a better understanding of each other. An actual good progression would be nice.

    Yunina March 13, 2020 12:04 am
    I totally agree. Like maybe a better understanding of each other. An actual good progression would be nice. BlueButterfly7

    Must be frustrating, earing the trashy cheating girl saying mean things about MC, knowing that repeating it will be useless.. MC won't believe him if he tries, I'm sure..