
Hi, I understand that this is a hard topic for a lot of people but please hear me out.
This is fiction and no one was hurt in the making of it.
There is actually a community for this stuff that's a lot more extreme than this. The fact that ideas such as "safe word" and "consent" were used and respected are very good.
Yes the act of molestation is wrong. The seme got lucky because the uke was fine with it. Was it messed up? Yes. Was it real? No.
While it may not be a trope you like, I would personally say it was done pretty well here. The only improvement they could have made would be if they dealt with the fact that it was molestation. It's just fiction so let us enjoy it.
The rest of the story was consensual non consent.

literally stop trying to berate me. I've read and written more fucked up shit than this knowing full well that it's "just fiction", but that doesn't mean I automatically have to be okay with everything and turn a blind eye all the time. y'all are very much free to enjoy this to your heart's content. I'm not sorry that I can't overlook the fact that this man is a molester and that he's shown little to no remorse whatsoever. so he's respected the use of a safe word once? good for him. in my book at least he's still an asshole though

Emmm I was being genuine with you. Why do you think I was berating you? If I was I would have never wrote anything this mild.
I think I made it obvious that I wasn't pushing my view on you and that I accepted that you don't have to like/approve of it and was just letting you know what I think. Just so that you could understand why someone may be ok with reading this.
well I'm glad this is over. I have not a single positive emotion for this left. remember kids, this man molested a random stranger on the train and now they're lovers! that's romantic. we sure love to see it