
Excuse me how rude This story is good yeah it needs to be fixed the plot but that doesn’t mean that you can be saying that this part this story is Shit that’s rude imagine you did something cool and somebody else was telling it shit you can’t think of your self think about this what would you do if you were in their shoes and everybody was talking how bad your story was

its called having an opinion honey if you cant handle criticism then maybe rethink your career im not saying its okay to hate on an author but if a story is shit then a story is shit and thats about it theres nothing u can do about it this is the internet where no one gives a shit about anyone's feelings sorry
chinese mangakas have such good art styles but write some of the worst stories holy shit