Just my opinion

DaniekaHerrin March 27, 2020 1:05 pm

Don’t raise your swords at me for this but... the story may be well rounded in its novel form but it didn’t translate well to a manga. The art is pretty but off and inconsistent in many areas. The plot becomes too fast paced and nonsensical almost right off the bat. The translation work (thank you translator for trying your best!) also added to its demise. Sometimes taking a little extra time to perfect these small fragments can piece together an even greater manga.

Responses
    lola March 29, 2020 7:17 am

    Well maybe you shouldn’t care about the plot and more on what’s happening and if you don’t get it then don’t read it Just saying

    DaniekaHerrin March 29, 2020 9:30 pm
    Well maybe you shouldn’t care about the plot and more on what’s happening and if you don’t get it then don’t read it Just saying lola

    You’re easily offended huh. Everyone that creates any form of art must learn to accept criticism so they can grow as an artist. I said nothing ill intentioned or ill mannered. I’m sure the creator would be sad to know you tell people to just not read their works instead of offering feedback and waiting for their next piece.

    Yoyo March 30, 2020 7:13 am

    What's this story novel.called

    hellen March 30, 2020 6:30 pm
    Well maybe you shouldn’t care about the plot and more on what’s happening and if you don’t get it then don’t read it Just saying lola

    True

    lola March 31, 2020 3:56 am
    You’re easily offended huh. Everyone that creates any form of art must learn to accept criticism so they can grow as an artist. I said nothing ill intentioned or ill mannered. I’m sure the creator would be ... DaniekaHerrin

    No I’m not easily offended I just hate how people just hate on other peoples work when they tried so hard to make this story

    DaniekaHerrin March 31, 2020 6:23 am
    No I’m not easily offended I just hate how people just hate on other peoples work when they tried so hard to make this story lola

    Where was I hating? I complemented the original story and the art. I just said that I didn’t personally feel it translated that well into a manga. I’m allowed my opinions and I said it respectfully. There is a difference between hate and constructive criticism.

    lola March 31, 2020 7:27 am
    Where was I hating? I complemented the original story and the art. I just said that I didn’t personally feel it translated that well into a manga. I’m allowed my opinions and I said it respectfully. There i... DaniekaHerrin

    What I’m saying is people car to much on the plot just read it and think to your self what’s happening and then it will be Explain In the story