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You’re easily offended huh. Everyone that creates any form of art must learn to accept criticism so they can grow as an artist. I said nothing ill intentioned or ill mannered. I’m sure the creator would be sad to know you tell people to just not read their works instead of offering feedback and waiting for their next piece.
Don’t raise your swords at me for this but... the story may be well rounded in its novel form but it didn’t translate well to a manga. The art is pretty but off and inconsistent in many areas. The plot becomes too fast paced and nonsensical almost right off the bat. The translation work (thank you translator for trying your best!) also added to its demise. Sometimes taking a little extra time to perfect these small fragments can piece together an even greater manga.