Author went too hard on the villain thing

Sei March 28, 2020 1:59 pm

I nearly dropped this manhwa when Sunyeon
went too far with the villain thing. Also, it took too long to resolve that I got frustrated with the entire plot itself.

Another thing, both MCs were too tsundere. From the start right up until almost to the very end. It's very frustrating as a reader. I wanted some space for stability but nothing was really set in stone. It's like being in an unlabelled relationship with your crush. Got me anxious all throughout. Not a good feeling.

If that was what the author was going for, they certainly had me squirming.

The general plot of it was good, the execution not so much.

*opinions from an unworthy reader.
no, I can't write or draw something almost ass good as this. just some constructive criticism.
I really do hope the author improves in time. i will be there to cheer them on

Responses
    Otoshi< March 28, 2020 4:58 pm

    i agreed with the whole thing. The art was really good tho!

    Sei March 29, 2020 2:16 am
    i agreed with the whole thing. The art was really good tho! Otoshi<

    Umu. The art is a redeeming quality.

    Otoshi< March 30, 2020 2:52 am
    Umu. The art is a redeeming quality. Sei

    Yeah ^^ ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

    MedukaMeguca April 1, 2020 9:40 pm

    Literally summed up me feelings for the last half of the story. I'm far from hating this story but there's thing i think could of been executed better.

    Otoshi< April 2, 2020 12:10 am
    Literally summed up me feelings for the last half of the story. I'm far from hating this story but there's thing i think could of been executed better. MedukaMeguca

    honestly... this is literally a kdrama but with gay dudes. We got the female lead, male lead, and cocky villain. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜