I feel lik some of yall ain't taking this well. I just meant to say that the second couple was a bit uncomfortable to read. That's it. We really seen these troupes in say "kokoro wo korosu hohou" or even in BJ alex. I didn't mean to offend anyone
(づ￣ ³￣)づ Hey now, ain’t nothing wrong with clichés once in a while, they just gotta be done right. I adored the first couple, we need some of that fluff sometimes.
But for the second couple, yes and it’s uncomfortable, I think that was the author purpose . But what I like about this story is that the author never puts some sad woe crap backstory for why the seme is a piece of shit, dude is just a piece of shit. Though naive, the uke is slowly but surely breaking down mentally. I think it’s pretty unique in the regard (￣∇￣")
╮(￣▽￣)╭ I’m not interested in anything else(not even the sex scenes) besides the story. I would to see how this one concludes!
Im just SO SO unimpressed with the second couple. The concept was overused and really not even executed well. Pls. Despite the first couples' storyline being cliché af I think the way it was short and to the point was well delivered infact i think the first few chapters the uke was quite unique even.(They just become cute fluffy after that so no complaints lol)
The second couple about a naive uke being taken advantage of and a slithery annoying seme that doesn't realize he's in "love" or whatever is really seem repeating itself in the BL community. It's really not fun nor is it interesting as a"psychological" bat shit genre either.