I think it's really good for 4 chapters. Yes, the seme could have gotten more development but honestly? That was good. So good I want to re-read this 5 seconds after finishing. Didn't expected it to be that good. That wasnt a regular bad boy story, everything was cohisive and thought out. I love the thought placed into the characters and the plot development was on point. I would have loved more but I think we can leave that at that. Great overall. I do think that a long story would have let us dive into the characters more but I don't know, this has a charm I can't even explain. Great.
I think it's really good for 4 chapters. Yes, the seme could have gotten more development but honestly? That was good. So good I want to re-read this 5 seconds after finishing. Didn't expected it to be that good.
That wasnt a regular bad boy story, everything was cohisive and thought out. I love the thought placed into the characters and the plot development was on point. I would have loved more but I think we can leave that at that. Great overall. I do think that a long story would have let us dive into the characters more but I don't know, this has a charm I can't even explain. Great.