tbh...

IhavetoomanyhusbandOs April 13, 2020 12:55 pm

ok I really don’t want to say this but their relationship dynamics don’t really make sense and the flow of the story feels awkward(?)/rushed. It’s like the author is trying to end the story asap. The story would have made more sense if it was longer. Like I had so many questions after reading it. Pls tell me I’m not the only one lol. No hate tho, the plot is definitely unique.

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    Minik April 13, 2020 1:05 pm

    Yeah I felt the same way tbh,
    What I’m confused about is he liked the mc because of the adrenaline/ survival instinct he got when around the guy who was trying to kill his friend and trying to kill him.
    Now that that’s gone and the reason to kill him is gone, and the Fact that mc killer starts to like the crazy guy,
    wouldn’t the feeling he got that made him feel alive disappear?

    IhavetoomanyhusbandOs April 13, 2020 1:17 pm

    I wld give you 10 big fat likes if I could lol...Exactly. The relationship ain’t realistic at all & it’s unhealthy.