You know I was so excited to have another female isekai but I'm so dissapointed and frustr...

PasserbyA April 15, 2020 3:47 pm

You know I was so excited to have another female isekai but I'm so dissapointed and frustrated. The art is amazing, the villainess motive is respectable but what is up with elongated conversation with the prince?? All that chapters just so she could be framed and treated the same. What's worse is that she's going along with it, instead of making a 180 comeback slap. Y'all the prince is frustrating but the villainess is even more.

Responses
    Penny April 15, 2020 4:48 pm

    I feel like this is more a problem of the author's pacing abilities than a fault with the MC--The author rehashed a lot. I don't think they've quite picked up on the cost of "overkill". Editing is an important skill as a storyteller, you have to give your audience what they want, but never enough that they don't want more. Less is more in this context.

    PasserbyA April 15, 2020 5:07 pm
    I feel like this is more a problem of the author's pacing abilities than a fault with the MC--The author rehashed a lot. I don't think they've quite picked up on the cost of "overkill". Editing is an importan... Penny

    U know what? I agree with the pacing thing. Most of the problem is definitely revolving around the pacing. I just know that her engagement probably won't dissolve that easily in the first few chapters because the author probably wants the prince to either fall for her over time or get to know her wits or something. It was just frustrating to see that this reincarnated adult women who has the knowledge and etiqutte from earth, can't deal with a childish problematic prince. Like I know she's smarter than that

    Penny April 15, 2020 7:10 pm

    Right? I've spent most of the reading time thinking "lord, please hurry up!" It isn't as if the MC thought she could have an intelligent conversation with him. In the first place, why would she just stand there and watch them flirt for so long? she should have interrupted them right away so she could say her piece and go do something more interesting--everything the author needed to convey about her they could have done by showing how unfazed and DONE she was with the whole situation.

    PasserbyA April 16, 2020 6:32 pm
    Right? I've spent most of the reading time thinking "lord, please hurry up!" It isn't as if the MC thought she could have an intelligent conversation with him. In the first place, why would she just stand ther... Penny

    Yes ma'am. YES MA'AM. DASS ON PERIOODDTTT