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If it goes a different way than you wrote right now, I would with pleasure read you're version if of course you would like to do it .
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yes so far in this story Kiel is supporter of old nobility he pro aristocracy as stated when Rael requested him to come to his side...
Amazing
I have so many ideas popping in my head as I read this...
First of all, if Rael is the ML, the author is really making this a slow burn.I'm hoping this means we get to see a surprising plot twist in the near future.
For example, maybe a candidate pretends to be Princess Morina (but masquerading as some noble lady so her "cover" isn't blown, so she actually has 2 covers). Except she is actually a hired actress sponsored by a noble to get more influence in court (if the actress becomes Crown Princess). Rael gets intrigued, and Marie attends to this candidate.
The actress plays her part as a "saintly princess" in front of the Prince, but Marie discovers that When the Prince isn't around, the candidate uses the Prince's name to abuse others and takes bribes from other nobles. Marie gets mad about this two-faced person, and lets Rael know. They set a trap together to expose the imposter, but the noble backing her is pretty high ranking so he pulls some strings to cover up the imposter's blunder.
This forces Marie to reveal things that only she, the REAL Princess Morina, would know. This calls for summoning some of the poor people of Cloyan to identify the "saintly princess" who helped them. Since they wouldn't have seen the imposter before, they'd point out Marie as the person who helped them.
Rael will then inwardly jump for joy and court Marie. Naturally,being blunt AF he first screws up by trying to order her to marry him or die(we will all call him an asshole for this). Marie is strongly against it, because she's been getting close to a certain maskless
blonde swordsman(AKA maskless Rael).This stabs Rael deep in the gut,andhe is unknowingly jealous of his unmasked self for awhile. Eventually, he courts her and she notices similarities between the Crown Prince and the "blonde swordsman".*
Alternate to the above paragraph: Marie sees a portrait of Rael unmasked while working in the Lion Palace, and they get to know each other. The reveal prompts Rael to openly court Marie.
At the same time, some nobles still have doubts, so they won't be satisfied unless she can prove herself as a princess. So for the next 200ish chapters (someone on here said the raws are running to 200 something chapters) it's Marie overcoming various tests with the help of the dreams. Rael gets more amazed the more she handles things.
Johannes butts in from time to time, and is basically the rival for Rael. Meanwhile, Marie sees more of Rael as a person, and sees his policies are done for the sake of the people. On the other hand, Kiel is a supporter of the old nobility, so he tries to persuade her that Rael's methods are crushing the aristocracy, and the "order" of the country. She disagrees and they drift apart.
That's all I got in terms of predicting...