I'm not sure the author really thought out about the lead's mission, it's just vauge and u...

angie April 17, 2020 11:30 am

I'm not sure the author really thought out about the lead's mission, it's just vauge and unneccecery most of the time, just to be thrown in again as a plot point.
Yes, I'm sure it's going to be important later but for now it just isn't. Maybe I missed something but IDK, as an undercover the fl seemes reather oblivious. She didn't study the place she got into, didn't try to make any contacts with any other people than the duke (really 'tried' there XD) for cover or anything and she didn't make the smallest effort to gather information. I don't care for her to fail but I do for her to at leat try. I actually really like the story and characters are great, but... the base of this entire thing is unimportant for over twenty episodes at this point ;_;

Responses
    vaneella April 17, 2020 2:45 pm

    Yeah, at some point I thought "so what was her mission again?" May as well work earnestly as the Duke got some peculiar business here and there, I think that would make a more focused and possibly more satisfying read.

    angie April 17, 2020 3:26 pm
    Yeah, at some point I thought "so what was her mission again?" May as well work earnestly as the Duke got some peculiar business here and there, I think that would make a more focused and possibly more satisfyi... vaneella

    Yeah, I kind of wished she just had was sent by her family or something. The mission is meh.

    kookiera April 17, 2020 4:36 pm

    ofcoz the author will show the interesting first . wat do u expect want to serious story first . ofcoz will be not interesting this is romance story they will falling inlove first .

    angie April 17, 2020 5:50 pm
    ofcoz the author will show the interesting first . wat do u expect want to serious story first . ofcoz will be not interesting this is romance story they will falling inlove first . kookiera

    That doesn't mean the main base to the plot is not important XD Also the story would be better with that. If an author is doing something because it's "interesting" rather than benefiting the plot, that's lousy writing. And I'm pretty sure that's not what the author meant to do here. They probably got into the story without thinking ahead, which is unfortunate.

    kookiera April 18, 2020 4:46 am

    i already read in newtoki . and by the end of the episode, they'll have a little bit of conflict and serious matter. at the same time, the LINDSAYAN will start to love FIAN because it saves LINDSAYAN’s life (i guess). the author will
    #-.-) show in the end ep .