I really liked the art but the story lacks something

Emeraldas April 19, 2020 3:30 pm

So the drawings and characters are neatly done, the story lacks something, it was inconsistent in some stuff.
(Spoiler alert!!!!)

Like if they need to reproduce, why are males mating with human males? Can they carry babies then? In the story they say something happens long ago between foxes and wolves yet they don’t deepen on it. Also can other humans tell foxes and wolves apart? Are they a secret to society? If not why the brother hates foxes that much? Also, is he human? I though the mother of Ho left his father not only because we didn’t have much money but also because she wanted to be with other fox. So confusing in many things at the end I just feel frustrated after reading. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

Responses
    Anonymous April 19, 2020 10:56 pm

    right ?? the art was great and the story had so much potential.. the side characters were funny too.. the author could a better job.. like they put every right thing in to cook a delicius food but have forgetten to mix them and season them well before putting it in the oven... ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭