I can't tell what but something about this throws me off. I can't tell if I don't like the ML or the FL cause they both have really good qualities but then suddenly the next panel will make me sorta cringe at their interactions. I feel like the dialogue is sorta strange and doesn't develop he story right. ?? This is so hard to explain... Like their whole interaction scene when Angela had to bring the prince papers find seem right. Like she just brought up rats and then out of no where brought up that they knew each other. And then he reaches out and grabs her face and then what he says is strange. And then she hits him? And he's just fine with it and then doesn't even wanna talk about what just happened? Don't get me wrong I like this read, but pacing and dialogue choices seem sorta Awkward some times in places. Idk, that's just my opinion tho and I don't think I did a very good job explaining it.
I can't tell what but something about this throws me off. I can't tell if I don't like the ML or the FL cause they both have really good qualities but then suddenly the next panel will make me sorta cringe at their interactions. I feel like the dialogue is sorta strange and doesn't develop he story right. ?? This is so hard to explain... Like their whole interaction scene when Angela had to bring the prince papers find seem right. Like she just brought up rats and then out of no where brought up that they knew each other. And then he reaches out and grabs her face and then what he says is strange. And then she hits him? And he's just fine with it and then doesn't even wanna talk about what just happened? Don't get me wrong I like this read, but pacing and dialogue choices seem sorta Awkward some times in places. Idk, that's just my opinion tho and I don't think I did a very good job explaining it.