I think I realised where the pace problem originated from. Idk if anyone else notices or t...

angie April 24, 2020 3:56 am

I think I realised where the pace problem originated from. Idk if anyone else notices or that maybe I'm just slow and everybody did, but suddenly it hit me that almost every sentance gets it's own new full on sheet. And now I kind of appriciate the artist behinde the story going for it like this... but I really wish they didn't. With the use of chibies, more willingless to lay out more words every time, and note on editing what we heard already multiple time (I know you want to kill him), we probably could have already gotten rid of the prince. Which sucks cause I hate him and fl is bae.

Either way this is still great and fun but it feels like most of the time we just stepped in place. The plot bearly started and we just could have gotten farther. Hope it gets better but for now I'll stop talking about the pace since it's surely gets in peoples hair already you welcome byyyeee

Responses
    ronniepony April 24, 2020 4:28 am

    honestly, i completely agree with you. the plot seems interesting but i feel that they're stretching the scenes for too long, repeating the same thing with different panels.

    im dropping it for this reason, and also because the MC is insanely spiteful and egotistical┗( T﹏T )┛

    altumn.rain April 24, 2020 4:36 am

    My advice to the fl is to get engangment annul cause it's going to only lead to more stress. I know she's trying to do it but she's always hesitating and only talking in her brain while others just assume that nothing is wrong and she doesn't accomplish any of her goals

    altumn.rain April 24, 2020 4:37 am

    My advice to the fl is to get engangment annul as soon as possible cause it's going to only lead to more stress. I know she's trying to do it but she's always hesitating and only talking in her brain while others just assume that nothing is wrong and she doesn't accomplish any of her goals