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I totally understand...it's just sitting through exposition, and not enough actual events going on.
I like detailed stories too but this one needs more balance...
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Don't worry about that too much, it's mostly wordy phrasing by presenting all problems into too many questions and probable answers.
the story's really interesting and detailed but... it might be a little too much detail. there's so many words that sometimes i just skip through the super long dialogues. i wish the updates were a little more frequent so i actually have an idea on what the story was about and wish there was more development between iris and alfreddddd. i hope iris learns about all the things happening in the dark and doesn't stay ignorant