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you know, I wanted to write a comment but was feeling lazy. that's when I read yours, and found everything I wanted to write. thanks for writing my thoughts (≧∀≦)
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you know, I wanted to write a comment but was feeling lazy. that's when I read yours, and found everything I wanted to write. thanks for writing my thoughts (≧∀≦)
Read this in one go and I liked it! The art style is amaaazing too ♡~ I can feel that it is the author's first work (as she mentioned), but it's not too bad. The story is sweet and refreshing.. i mean, it's my first time to encounter a story with this concept. Though I'd have to agree with others that it felt a bit rushed. I think this story could actually work as a 60-chapter+ sort of thing?..with more backstory and happy moments etc. That'll probably help with the development of the story and be less confusing to others (tho i didn't get confused as i thought i would be bec of the comments). Tbh tho, I wanted to see more lovey dovey stuff from them lol. I didn't get my fill because it's short haha ;_;
I want to see more from the author..i think there's a lot of potential and I really love love love the art ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ will look forward to future works.