I loved the beginning of the story but in the recent chapters we see almost nothing about ...

shouncn May 6, 2020 12:26 am

I loved the beginning of the story but in the recent chapters we see almost nothing about the children and only the potential love interests of MC dont get me wrong I'd love for her to be happy but this is all going so fast and I feel like the whole "return to the past and change the relationship she had with her children" is no longer the plot of the story anymore

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    LeenAnanz May 6, 2020 10:35 pm

    I think it's more of a church and imperial family war and Nora's life rather than "MC's love interest"
    I think taking the story for a while to look into other stuff is actually a nice move. It gets boring when the plot focuses on MC's relationship with the children the whole actual time.
    Don't worry, I don't think the "plot" changed.

    Tanakasbabygirl May 10, 2020 12:00 am

    I agree, I mostly read it because I want to read her about her relationship with the children and I don't rlly like the focus rn but I'm sure it'll change soon

    YourLocalNobody-San May 11, 2020 9:16 am

    [You can skip this its just pointless rambles my MAIN MESSAGE is at the bottom, but feel free to read if you want!]
    Well, they are not really love interest in my eyes, or at least yet!

    These kids have no chance with her as of now and maybe never, for one she has the will, it says to watch over the kids until the oldest takes control of the family, now the will is not saying she is not allowed to date anyone, but makes it pretty clear her priority should be with the kids and helping them for the future and when the oldest takes control of the family, she is free to do whatever she wants.

    In one of the early chapters when the oldest was going to get married and take over the family, she was excited an was talking about how she will finally be able to date and be free, I think that's one thing she won't be changing in this second life, her dating habits, shes too dedicated to the will and the kids she loves to date anyone and I don't think the kids would accept it no matter who it is, so there wont be any romance for a while I believe.




    [THE MAIN MESSAGE I WANT TO GET ACROSS]

    When we read stories like this we're so quick to match the FL to someone, as its just out of habit most of the time, if we see a boy that is nice to our FL or is related to her in a good way we ship them together, BUT we never usually think what kind of bad they could do to the FL instead of good.

    The Crowned Prince showed his true self in the carriage, he's a crazy royal slob who thinks he can get whomever or whatever he wants, when it's like this I see him as a potential threat to the FL instead of a love interest, what happens when she turns him down in the future? Wouldn't he go crazy because he's finally unable to get something he doesn't want, he might start being rude or maybe kill anyone who tries to get close to her! Ofc its just a guess but I wouldn't hold it past him.

    With Nora, he's a good boy, through out this you can see he knows his place and he knows the difference between him and Shuli and knows Shuli is a woman with three children, you can tell because at the memorial he was quite rowdy and openly rude to the prince but when his father asks how him and Shuli meets he doesn't tell the truth and isn't rowdy and boasting, this shows he has realized that she was an untouchable woman as soon as he realized their status. In the recent chapters he refers Shuli as "Miss" or "Noona" which further proves he only views Shuli as a woman with three children that he feels comfortable talking to.

    Now I'm talking about what kind of bad they can bring, and Ik you're probably thinking Nora can't cause anything bad, but he can, the fact he is free to go over to speak to Shuli whenever he wants with the church on her case can cause future problems and nasty rumours that could potentially have our FL to have a emotional breakdown, not only that but if Nora were to find out about the rumours he could either:

    A. Try to free the rumours but ends up making it worse

    or

    B. He starts avoiding Shuli, causing her to worry, when she already has enough on her plate.

    See when you take a step back and really read through the story, you can catch onto these small things and have your mind wander with the possibility of what happens in the future, not only does this make reading better, it makes you want to continue reading the story and realize things you haven't really realized before


    Also I want to say I sounded a little rude up there when I said "if you really read through the story" I didn't mean to imply you don't read through the story, I just didn't know how else to phrase it, but like I mean if you like look at all the small details or maybe go back and re read to pick up on stuff you never seen before it will make the reading fun and excited for what the future holds in the story. sorry for the essay and thanks for reading if you made it this far, people don't usually read my things which makes me kinda sad but like ion wanna read my own essay so I understand.(≧∀≦)
    So thank you for actually reading what I had to say it means a lot! ╥﹏╥

    Nahh but seriously all love! Wash your hands and stay healthyz! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧