Seems forced

Rice Daddy May 6, 2020 6:01 am

This story honestly feels like it’s written to be sad just to be sad. All the trauma and abuse, I honestly can’t tell if they’re written to add some depth or just forced for that shock value. The characters all seem so... shallow. A boy conditioned to be abused or a badly written character that wants sex immediately after being raped? A ‘hero’ (complex) that’ll have sex with a guy that was just raped? A sister that was raped but still easily forgives this brother after knowing what he did? The twin brother was the most annoying one. He literally has no value as a character other than 1) being a coward 2) not understanding what rape is (wtf??) after walking in on his ‘crush’ being raped 3) seeing the abuse of his ‘crush’ first hand and being attracted to this abuse (!!!) and 4) running away. The twin sister is overbearing and judgmental. She’s such a... bitch for a lack of a better word.

How is it that I don’t like any of these characters?

Responses
    saeseoulshi May 6, 2020 7:36 am

    seyhun is a boy who was abused since he was a young adult. I doubt that he had normal sex before boris. They treated him like a man whore and made him believe that he's nothing but trash. Boris had sex with him bc he wanted to show seyhun that yes you can have sex where the both of you feels good, that he's worth it and that he can be loved.

    Nekohime™ May 6, 2020 11:37 am

    Well written!

    Alex May 7, 2020 6:54 am

    I feel like the characters are just realistic, they have major flaws that erupted from witnessing a harsh reality, the characters and how they really are like their own individuals are honestly amazing imo