The concept is really good. You could go wild with it, but author clearly has not. The pacing is bad, the chapters do not flow and I'm left with a distinct sensation of 'wtf just happened'.
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The concept is really good. You could go wild with it, but author clearly has not. The pacing is bad, the chapters do not flow and I'm left with a distinct sensation of 'wtf just happened'.