This

I actually find myself agreeing with you. Ive seen some comments bout how this is rare or something? But it seems pretty typical to me. Pacing is awkward and rushed and Im not really seeing the point of having them be reborn. And also the introduction of their superpower was like wot. Super sudden and convenient (also a good way to describe alotta stuff in this mangalol). Seems a little everywhere. Yeah so pretty much you typical fantasy reborn stuff, super rushed, with not so good execution. Also the way the killed off the mother was so... *sigh* like they couldnt even come up with a believable death, like something more to do with drinking

To me the worst was the depiction of their abuse, like if they want us to feel empathatic etc they have to say less and show more fitting scenes.. authors only use a lot of words if they can't properly depict the situation via the image
like the scene has to be darker, the pain more visible?? this is a serious topic?? it looks like a 12 year old did this
also the ' oh we're so brave for putting up with it ' don't try to tell us, show us like it just seems like they're trying too hard to convince us and ' oh no we're so used to abuse we flinchhh ' you don't have to say it?? It's obvious? The more the author describes every superficial scene the less power it has like .... the author needs to grow up, read some good old manga and find a brain

I feel like it's more what Id imagine someone who has never gone through abuse would depict it as, so obviously it lacks depth (like everything else in the story lol). The imma use words and spell everything out to you instead of just showing it properly, I find is also a common problem with a lot of manga. I dont think this manga knows what tone or direction it's going for so it just does all of them. Like concerning the abuse, you could either throughly cover it and depict everything, or omit those scenes altogether and imply that it is going on in the background based on their actions and behaviour. But yeah, author isnt sure where its going so sorta half commits to showing it and it doesnt work well. The whole thing just lacks class I find.

exactly.