The MC tends to act out of character a lot, and it kind of lacks the struggle and mental d...

yiemmi June 3, 2020 11:06 am

The MC tends to act out of character a lot, and it kind of lacks the struggle and mental damage of a masacre. And this lacks a smooth flow, pretty abrupt? I don't know

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    ObsidianGoddess June 3, 2020 1:46 pm

    Same I was about to say like did I miss chapters or something cause he grew too quick