Well the ending was rushed, not what I was expecting but a great story none the less grea...

Rosepainter June 6, 2020 3:29 am

Well the ending was rushed, not what I was expecting but a great story none the less great workヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

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    Anniexoxo June 12, 2020 10:20 pm

    How did it seem rushed to you if you don’t mind me asking?

    Rosepainter June 13, 2020 4:34 am
    How did it seem rushed to you if you don’t mind me asking? Anniexoxo

    I just felt the story could have expanded more towards the end, him going into his parent's room, or just exploring more about their healing processes as time went on. I don't know it was good, just felt a little hmmm Idk just bland towards the end. I think given the effort they did it was a really solid story.