As much as I love this story it would be a helluva lot better if author-nim backed off the...

CrazyPyschoBean June 11, 2020 6:22 am

As much as I love this story it would be a helluva lot better if author-nim backed off the comedy and pushed a lot more of the darker underlying themes. It would make it a bit more serious and melancholy therefore adding to overall character growth. Just my opinion though. Like I said, I still love this story.

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    CrazyPyschoBean June 12, 2020 7:59 am
    This reply will be showed after approved! peevacorn

    Totally! Like, if it focused a bit more on her distress over her lost memories from before he turned back time would be great. Or gave more attention to how he feels about the fact that the person he loves most currently HATES him for what he -technically- did to her brother a lifetime ago.