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In what way is it cliché? It's unlike anything I've ever read before. The plot isn't particularly messy either. I can agree on the characters making dumb decisions though. They do, all the time.
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In what way is it cliché? It's unlike anything I've ever read before. The plot isn't particularly messy either. I can agree on the characters making dumb decisions though. They do, all the time.
This story is pretty cliche, the plot is messy and the characters make some pretty dumb decisions. But i still like it. I dont know why, but i do