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Yeah....I completely agree. like this has the potential to be on par with "death is the only ending for a villainess" but the flow between and during the chapters makes it difficult to follow.
out of curiousity... can you explain where the pacing is going wrong?
It feel as tho some parts are missing
It might be unpopular opinion, but the story telling is pretty sloppy. The flow of th story and the info aren't conveyed for us readers.