Am I the only not feeling this? I know at the end Ryohei said he liked Yuuma but it just ...

Phantom D. Venus June 21, 2020 9:06 pm

Am I the only not feeling this? I know at the end Ryohei said he liked Yuuma but it just felt like when you started from A and suddenly went to Z. And I can't seem to like the Ryohei because of how he acts. This should be longer to show a better character development in my opinion.

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    T-raw June 21, 2020 10:19 pm

    For me I just don't see it as a completed story. Both characters has a ton of growing and communicating left to do so it feels unfinished and an unstable relationship.

    Calcd June 21, 2020 10:27 pm

    I thought the contrary, he was moved, specially in the parts where he described how Yuuma had a affection that did not ask for anything in exchange, it was not explicit and not deep enough, but I'd like to think I understood the character.

    mashira June 21, 2020 11:22 pm

    At the end of chap 5 I thought "They won't last a month", but after the bonus chapter I changed my mind.

    They won't /even/ last a month.

    T-raw June 22, 2020 4:57 am
    At the end of chap 5 I thought "They won't last a month", but after the bonus chapter I changed my mind.They won't /even/ last a month. mashira

    Ahahaha yea