What if u actually worked really hard doing this just to hear someone say a 12 yr could do better that would hurt ur feelings I understand that it's ur opinion but still remember everyone has feeling's
uhmmm??? did you see me just bash it without actually giving out the points of why i think it lacks??? IT'S MY OPINION, NOT ALL OPINIONS WILL PLEASE EVERYONE. are you 12 or something that you got offended bec i think 12 year olds make so-so story? but they actually do make the cringiest ones, also did i say that they should stop writing then? no because it's a step to improving, knowing where you need to improve. just because you worked hard over something doesn't mean it's acceptable for everybody, it's the same as working hard for an exam to the point of fatigue but doesn't mean you'll get the highest score sometimes you might even not pass the exam at all. it is what it is, move along.
Ok I understand that some opinions won't please everyone but still at least make one good comment about it rather than just giving criticism
i literally said the plot was nice and the art style is pretty, i don't think i need to explain that since everyone can directly see that but i need to explain why i dislike how everything progressed and why i dislike the characters, thanks for understanding.
Guys literally....what's the point of arguing in here if this can't even reach to the author ╮(￣▽￣)╭
i guess because it's doesn't have a lot of fucking and big dicks lol... what are you talking about ?the story is far more good than Papa Datte, Shitai or Make Me Bark or Shame♡Application, the webtoon is more serious and deals with homophobia it have more mature subjects than just fucking 80% of times like most of the popular trashy yaoi manga.
the way you have a selective reading when all i talked about how the relationships between the characters never really progressed properly, it just happened to cater to the plot without proper development that it's unbelievable but you're talking about those scenes which i think were unnecessary . this is the standard for you?? THE BAR IS LOW. try reading dark heaven before u open ur mouth
i tried to read it but it was meh to me .everyone have a taste i didn't shame you for you liking yaoi porn enjoy what you want, also i accept criticism and for some part yeah you were right but there is a lot of yaoi that the main couple haven't developed probably but the manga was good, i rather have a story that focuses more on the story than have a whole story about just two people . as 25 years old woman who enjoyed this webtoon you pretty much telling me that i enjoy stuff that for 12 years old of course i will be triggered by it if i said Shame♡Application is for horny teenagers straight girls people who love this webtoon will be triggered.maybe don't shame people for the things that you don't like the criticism is welcomed but "stories written by 12 year olds can even be better than this" is unneeded
and let be realistic here Woojung will never see JinWoo feelings Woojung is homophobic and straight so he rather moves on to someone else yes maybe he loved Sarang for his face at first but it clear that JinWoo stopped having feeling for Woojung and moved on maybe he liked Woojung just for his face , also Sarang finally found someone who is nice to him lol of course he will love JinWoo with or without development the ending was more realistic than JinWoo and Woojung ending togather.
I'm saying wattpad 2012 based on my experience, i managed to reread what what written back then and realize there wasn't any development at all. story just started, they met then BAAM im in love with you for life. none of that makes any sense. imagine claiming to be in love for the most part of ur life to someone but then wasn't the least bit bothered when it wasn't even the guy that he's into that he slept with, wasn't even at least concerned that it was the brother and how the subject of his affection would have felt. most of the things within the story wasn't consistent just like that, worse the claim from one chapter is conflicting from other chapters (this chapter says he's utterly in love with this person, the next panel/chapter does things that doesn't prove the mentioned claim).
and the way you keep putting words in my mouth that's on you, there wasn't even a part where i said shame application and the likes were my favorite, you assumed that.
I SAID THAT THERE WASN'T ANY PROPER DEVELOPMENT BETWEEN THE RELATIONSHIP OF THE CHARACTERS the story progressed but there was no profound element within the story THAT BACKED/JUSTIFIES THE SUPPOSEDLY STORY DEVELOPMENT. it's like everything in this story just happened because the author said so. somewhat the same as me going on a foreign country then i point randomly to a person in a bar and claim we're together forever because we love each other, that's how random the turns in this story went. like i said the story had potential but FOR ME, how it played out wasn't it. i was talking about THE WRITING. if you enjoy stuff for 12 year olds i don't care but me saying that this sort of development is parallel to the ones teenagers write in wattpad back in 2012 and if you took that personally, that's on you. even though bad story progression isn't mutually exclusive to young writers but that's the general take that i'm going for. this wasn't a personal attack by the way but somehow, you started getting personal when i was talking about my take on the writing style. best of luck ig
there is something called hookup culture he fucked the wrong person not a big deal i don't know why he will freak out people hookup all the time even if it wasn't with the person that they liked . i think you didn't watch a lot of harem anime most of them are like that he have a crush on a girl but then he end up with a different girl without any development that happens a lot in anime i also read a lot of yaoi are like that, lol naruto ended up with hinata without any development but people love this couple anyway.
i think the author rashed the couple because 1st the manhwa is short like i read it in two hours and 2nd because they wanted to focus in everyone not just Jinwoo and sarang .anyway it's not like i don't see what you are coming from i totally understand why you didn't like the manhwa your criticism is totally in the place just note a lot of anime and tv shows etc... have zero couple development. and i don't like stuff that made for 12 years old lol i'm just saying this manhwa isn't made for 12 years old.anyway i understand why you didn't like the manhwa let's agree on that.
This is solely based on my opinion but stories written by 12 year olds can even be better than this. The plot was alright but I hated how the plot flowed within this story.
There was little to no development from the characters. The only characters acceptable for me was Woojung and his mom. Don't even start me with Jinwoo, imagine claiming to be in love with Woojung since high school but then the twin showed up and nothing... His character was too shallow that I can't even fathom, I dislike him as much as I dislike Seohee. He didn't even bother to think about whether he actually liked Sarang or just because his face looks like Woojung even though he addressed that during his confession, it was too rushed, it was so unconvincing. The same goes for Sarang, in love with Eungi? Boy wasn't even bothered when he first slept with Jinwoo. Although I'm happy he got out of a toxic relationship, the fact that he's quick to jump into another was so annoying. There's not even an actual development for their relationship, it feel like it just happened for the plot with no proper build up, it's infuriating. Some conflict for Jinwoo didn't even happen just to be certain whether it was Sarang or Woojung that he wants.
Everything happened so fast, it feel very forced. Art style was pretty too but the story is just not doing it for me. Characters are too shallow for me.