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You got a point there(⊙…⊙ )
I felt the exact same. It seemed like a pretty standard bl at first, and the uke was even starting to come around, but then the seme went and took him captive, which felt... unnecessary? Like the captivity kink was sort of forced in there for the hell of it. The stalker as well - what was that even about?
Damn, I felt like the story had a clear path of what it was trying to accomplish but then at some point, it went in a completely different direction. I think this story has potential if it didn't feel so rushed; is that only me??
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