
You know it’s people like you who think giving their opinion with words like “cheap”, “a new kind of low” and “potential” think this is creative criticism or whatever the hell you think it is, you’re mistaken you’re being rude and are you even taking into consideration the amount of time and effort people put in a story or a webtoon? Have you even tried to think about maybe there’s a back story to this before you write trash and call it criticism you don’t criticize something halfway, that’s why it’s called “comment” on here you “comment“ not “criticize” a work in progress you see the finish work and then you criticize, do you know the mental state you can put the author in if he or she by any miracle sees this, they may doubt themselves and start altering the story or they may even say bullshit to you and finish their story I hope it’s the latter though, if you want potential create your own and do whatever you want with your character if not read and finish the story before you give your “criticism”.
I was so excited because finally BL with varsity characters and some spicy rivalry but I was honestly very disappointed. Lee Kang is straight up trash, I hate his guts and there's nothing justifiable about what he did like at all! Even if I've read rape themes multiple times, but this one just hits a new kind of low. The story flowed so badly that the rape makes it cheap as hell. I don't really want to victim blame Junho but I seriously get frustrated about his character. He's this cool, persistent guy but for some reason, he misplaces his good qualities and just goes for the dumb character who falls for the damn trap over and over. It's not as if he's THAT helpless but he somehow manages to make himself look defenseless all the time that he gets taken advantage of and it's frustrating to read. I swear if they end up with each other I might end up saying something mean without it being a criticism. If Lee Kang somehow gets a character development, the author HAS A LONG FREAKING WAY TO GO. At this point, it's unacceptable that he suddenly changed his trashy methods because he fell in love or something like that bullshit.
It has so much potential but then baam! Wasted, hopefully it gets better. I'm cheering on for the author.