Hmmm.

LazyParrot July 2, 2020 3:47 pm

I don't know, something is bugging me. The dialogues doesn't feel right/fit and there are holes that I wished it was filled. I get the gist of the story, it's adorable, the slow progression and what not but it left me questioning a few stuffs.
Hope I'm not the only one being weird for reading into it too much.

Responses
    boohoo July 25, 2020 5:42 am

    wow i'm not the only one ! this story felt odd, kinda like it was dragged out but also very quick paced. it did feel off but it was cute regardless