Exactly. I agree 100%.
Lol I thought this would be met by more downvotes, cause these days in yaoi ppl real treat ukes like some baby instead of a mature adult while semes r treated like an experienced person who has to steer all the course of relationship by himself.
I personally always thought that seme was just being an immature kid who doesn't know how to express himself or his feelings except in a violent way. Which ain't a thing which can't be changed. He was just inexperienced.
Yeah, the seme can definitely improve. On a side note, I have to admit he is coming off a bit too scary for my taste, to be honest. What's worse is I get the feeling this is NOT actually what the author intends to do, here... and I don't know if it's just me or if it's a problem of his characterization... but those angry expressions of his certainly give me the chills... I hope the author manages to solve this problem if it turns out it's not actually their intention to make this character feel that way... But, typical jerk behavior aside, some of his exchanges with the uke gave a vibe like he could become abusive any moment, now... The kind of behavior that should give warning bells to women in real life, telling them to stay the hell away from him.
Yh the smirks in the middle were totally not needed. There he seemed like some sinister calculating freak. I also felt that idk if the author realised it or not, they made him look more like a villain than the mc. Even if he didn't do that much those evil expressions on his face, totally betrayed the author's intentions (assuming there was) to show him just immature. I think that since the author shows at the end that he just wasn't able to convey his feelings cause of his pride there was no need for those evil smirks there. Lol
Haha, yeah, from a certain perspective, he might have seemed like he was switching from a smirking, calculating psycho, to an angry, volatile control freak...
Either way, IMHO the author needs to realize it's making him out to be way too unlikable for readers, and do sth about it, asap. Cause at this rate, he'll be too unrelatable for any plot twist to come save his sinking popularity with readers.
Seme: U like young gun right? This ain't the right way.
Me: Dude, is this really ur brain working here? Did u ever use to be so mature. Did the cigarette affect ur brain cells or something?
Uke: What he and u weren't going out?
Me: Yh dude they weren't. Did ur nerve cells connect properly now. Damn ur habbit of making assumptions and running away is fucking annoying.
Well whatever I just wanna say I see everyone blaming the seme but I think if its going down it's because both of them. We have seen many ukes that r brats in many manga but they change for their partners. The seme here is such. I mean seme's shouldn't always be proper and nicely leading their relationship right? Is it always just the seme's responsibility to be clear in a relationship. Yh the guy's totally messed up but the uke is no less messed up. The guy makes assumptions, runs away and himself doesn't try to understand his partner. And about the seme's bad I don't think I need to tell. Everyone is already saying the guy is fucked up. But u know even a very bad guy may love u like no one else, it depends if u as a partner can make ur relationship such. And both the guys failed here. Just saying that both of them r hella annoying. Not one. Seme may be more annoying but the way uke behaves is likes he wants everything on a dish without any effort. Dude, u gotta talk he is not some psychic.