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agreed..the characters were interesting..mainly the alpha..but the story flow was wierd..or maybe I just couldn't understand the ukes past..idk..but it did have a wierd vibe to it..storywise.
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agreed..the characters were interesting..mainly the alpha..but the story flow was wierd..or maybe I just couldn't understand the ukes past..idk..but it did have a wierd vibe to it..storywise.
like ok there’s an idea but the flow of the story is like all over the place? idk if it’s just me but that’s what i get
what i like about this tho is that alpha is really considerate and even tho he tasted the pleasure of being a sub and a bottom, he didn’t succumb to that temptation. because the one’s i usually read in stories like this is that they’ll be submissive and whatnot, so the story became very predictable and cliché. i’m glad this didn’t turn out like that.