Aye-yo! Those shriveled up dick redraws had me bawling

Rainbow☆Unicorn July 16, 2020 8:19 am

Haha, the only likable trait is his face!
He's like an Alternative Model you'd find on Instagram and obsess over when you were like... What, 14?? ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
That kind of idol-like obsession doesn't mix well in the dating world. ( ̄∇ ̄")?
And Let's add a quick with his fist as a bonus~

The MC comes off as a Kid who can't distinguish perception from reality...
You can obviously tell it's all one-sided! And don't give me that 'Masaki can't express himself' kind of crap- It felt like he was more tolerating than it being real love. I can't see a relationship like that lasting long. And I'm all about eternal love, baby!~ but this ain't the one.

Maybe I just feel iffy because of the pacing. Sure, it's a short story. But the Mc felt oddly hollow to me. ( ~ ̄△ ̄)~

My brain is oddly hyperactive right now. it's about that time...
I'ma head off bed, Night.

Responses
    Wynter July 16, 2020 9:44 am

    But it's definitely not one-sided. It's subtle but misaki shows throughout the story that he's developing feelings for Tsubasa. Like whenever Tsubasa says summer's almost over and he wondered if he could still stay, Misaki paused and then said he'd just stay anyway. That was definitely him wanting Tsubasa to stay without outright saying it.
    Also we've seen Tsubasa hug Misaki many times considering how short the story is and at the end they use a whole panel showing Misaki reach up and hug him back.
    And the fact that the only time Misaki smiled in the whole thing was bc of Tsubasa and also when he reached out to family he'd been pushing away just to help Tsubasa?
    It seemed obvious to me how much Misaki loves Tsubasa if you paid attention to the little things.

    Besides, this is yaoi. Having an idol like obsession is a pretty good pathway to true love with boys love stories hah.
    Some suspension of belief, as with most works of fiction, is also required when reading stuff like this. Seems like you might be trying to put a little too much reality in there yourself, dude

    It's cool that you didn't shit all over story when explaining why you didn't like it, btw. Props to ya

    ren__san July 16, 2020 10:38 am

    I dunno, man. I mean, I know him from Oniku-chan and I hated the dude SO MUCH but he literally seems like an actual human when he's with Asukai.