
-Capitol letters cause carpal tunnel syndrome due to the pinching action of reaching for those keys. Lots of people are aware of this, why aren't you? No one has the right, stupid. Did they make a new amendment to the Bill of Rights? LOL
-I'm fixing your colloquial slang, not wording, as a favor. You don't appreciate it? Your insecurity is the problem, not me.
-My punctuation is just fine.
-You don't need to turn off a brain that's already turned off. 凸
- Use semi-colons sparingly. Put a comma between compound sentences.

Wow you're really into defending this story that it's almost pathetic. I just looked through some of the comments agreeing with my opinion and you seem to have responded to each one with something snarky.
Get a life. Why are you so obsessed with this story and get offended when people have a negative opinion on it?? Not everyone is gonna enjoy it. Period.
I'm not gonna respond to you anymore cause I'll be reading other stories that I actually like. You can continue to reply back but just so you know, you lost this arguement as soon as you decided to "correct" someone's wording over providing a genuine critique. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

Ignore them, they are (shockingly), completely wrong xDDDD
https://www.google.com/amp/s/dictionary.cambridge.org/es/amp/ingles/anyways Anyways is correct, by the way. Informal, still correct. Don't waste your time answering someone who likes to give grammar lessons when they don't even know how slang works lol.

You must be a complete idiot. There is no such thing as informal in the English language, douche bag. It's called slang for a reason. Also, dictionaries are there to inform. They give all kinds of information. Go off the internet and get a real dictionary, you idiot, not that it will help you if all you want to do is win an argument. That's not why dictionaries exist. Copy and paste some stupid shit trying to win an argument in order to defend a fellow idiot. You're a joke in every comment you make. You think I haven't argued this point before with better grammarians than you? You can use anyways anywhere except on a resume, in front of a college professor, in front of your boss if they're at all cultured, in a story you're submitting for publication (it will get your work tossed in the slush bin so fast), in front of college educated friends (though its not worth much today), at work, in front of any teachers, in front of anyone intelligent - except someone like you who only thinks they have a brain. Let's see where else...... You're so wrong. Keep going. You're never going to win this against me.
I hate the seme; I don't think I'll continue reading even tho the art is pretty.
I think I've dropped quite a few stories because I find the semes actions towards the uke to be irredeemable. Ofc I could turn off my brain and continue to read (I've done it before) but I'll forget this story in few weeks anyways so there's no point in me staying onboard.
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