I feel like the story could’ve went so many different ways without the r*pe. Starting wi...

heartbeatcoochie July 23, 2020 12:28 am

I feel like the story could’ve went so many different ways without the r*pe. Starting with the whole blackmail thing. The author could’ve made him blackmail the MC with some other material. The r*pe didn’t have to happen at all. Could’ve been a kiss or something. They could’ve been rivals without the whole rape to romance thing because it is not romanctic at all. Sometimes I wish I could rewrite stories and tweak them in my mind because the way this story would’ve been so much better without the r*pe and a little more work put into the plot... *sigh*

Responses
    miki July 23, 2020 4:31 am

    Why do you want to fix the story?

    heartbeatcoochie July 23, 2020 7:23 am
    Why do you want to fix the story? miki

    Because the plot could’ve had 1000x better potential without the rape...

    raindragon July 24, 2020 6:12 am
    Because the plot could’ve had 1000x better potential without the rape... heartbeatcoochie

    lmao. you think you can do better?