I'm sorry but where's the appeal?

Ira.Ilya July 23, 2020 10:46 pm

No offense to the art itself, it's cute, but what's with this dynamic.
High school ex that's all cute and sweet to the FL, but has troubled relationship with his mother, is biased and unprofessional at work, and starts a piss contest with another guy because he feels he has the upper hand.

And on the other hand we have... A moody mean dude that apparently didn't and doesn't mean to be the way he is, but he was an ass to FL and now he somehow loves her.

Also the FL herself is as watery as an unbaked vanilla cookie.

My dudes, are you f kidding me. THEY ARE ADULTS AND YET THEY ACT LIKE THEY'RE 13, I get tht love makes you blind, but I don't think stupid was on the list.


Sorry if this all came off as super mean, again the author tried and that's okay, the art is good... But guys the personalities man... Σ(っ°Д °;)っ

Responses
    Turbofan July 23, 2020 11:13 pm

    Very typical shoujo fl

    Flyta_Waring July 24, 2020 10:48 am

    Honestly, I can't say I get the characters either.
    Shouldn't logic be placed above affection?
    Idk.

    Ira.Ilya July 24, 2020 10:53 am
    Honestly, I can't say I get the characters either.Shouldn't logic be placed above affection?Idk. Flyta_Waring

    Yeah I mean, I get it if it's a highschool setting with teenagers and kids... But these people are supposed to be adults...