Confused

aliendroid July 26, 2020 6:25 pm

Am I the only one confused? Who is this FL that she's waiting for? All she's talked about is her family's downfall. Then suddenly there's a FL, that isn't her older sister? And a villainess? I feel like we entered one book in the beginning and now the author is like "Wait! This will make it too short! Let's add this and this and this" and is making things up now. I'm confused! I can't get a grasp of the "book" that she was reincarnated into at all!

Responses
    Achaca July 26, 2020 6:31 pm

    Well it IS only the beginning.
    Her sister put him to sleep, he confessed, she ran away founding her boyfriend dead, everyone was killed.

    I doubt that setting took place over one whole year. So the guy had to find his true love after that hadn’t he? I mean he is the main character of the book.

    aliendroid July 26, 2020 7:11 pm

    But she said it happened at the "climax" of the book. So, in other words the books most important and tension driven moment. Hence my confusion. If the family survived that FAR into the main story line why isn't the FL mentioned AT ALL before? Why only now bring it up when a relationship is in the works? It just sounds like lazy writing to me to have an excuse for the "contract with terms and time limits" cliche to be worked into the story. Honestly, I guess I'm just unsatisfied with how the writer is handling this whole process. I like our MC, so I'll continue, I just wish that the writer was better at framing her story and setting the groundwork. Because to me, it's flimsy at best.