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Wow, my thoughts exactly! The plot you described could’ve made a pretty solid manga with interesting twist. If it was about two-three volumes long it’d be perfect. And yes, those obscure rape-y scenes were totally unnecessary.
I really liked the concept of the story, I thought it was really interesting, the art was nice too, but the execution and some parts of the plot weren’t really to my taste.
The rape-hand job felt unnecessary and hindered the development of the already rushed and illogical romance.
I don’t know if it’s just written weirdly or got lost in translation, but the plot was pretty confusing (I could guess what happened, but I had to GUESS)
The black hair dude annoyed me with his petty shit and blind fanaticism (but I understood it’s point in the story, it felt necessary to have it there), the white hair dude, again, the rape-y sh*t felt unnecessary and made the romance feel even more rushed.
I didn’t understand why they liked each other, to me it made no sense whatsoever.
I wish it had been longer, had a better developed romance with no pointless rape, preferably a slow enemies to friends to lovers development where after sharing a room and getting to know each other black haired guy starts to understand/ sympathize with blond dude and slowly stops being a prick (but remains a devoted fanboy with yuzutsu being a taboo topic) after there’s a big “yuzutsu-sama’s actually an a$$” reveal at the end where black hair guy overhears the head stuff(makes a connection to the witch story), has a mental breakdown and is late in stopping shit from going down. Leaves because of guilt, (gets letters from blond guy, but thinking it’s from yuzutsu he ignores them out of fear/ guilt) later grows a pair and tries to expose yuzutsu for all his sh*t after being called back, just to find he’s dead and blond dude took his place. They cry and reminisce over the past/look back on shit with an adult head, then fu€k. Happy End
Pretty cliche and not that different from now, but see how much more sense it makes without the forced handjob? I usually don’t mind r@pe in yaoi but here I didn’t like it.
Anyway, thanks for the updates :) and sorry for the rant.