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everydayy July 31, 2020 9:47 pm

I binged read this today and although I liked it a lot in the beginning... one of my bigget critiques on this story is how tf is she kidnapped so many times??? I thought she was supposed to be a badass strong spy lmao. Shojo tropes do be doing Lindsay wrong. Also the new art style, while it doesn't look bad at all, I miss the old style. The bangs...are gonna take a while to get used to it was such a downgrade from her old one. Anyway, I still like this story overall.

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    octotooth July 31, 2020 10:07 pm

    Yeah but i dont think it's the reason. In shojo troupes the FL mets the Ml and her life is changed for the better. But in this case t's not. Lydian doesn't take things personally and use mostly logic. So she's always forgiving. She has been kidnapped so many times and just shrugged it off but fian know its his fault everything is hi fault. o he''s attracted to lidyan who still sticks by him even if he's caused so much pain.The reason i think it's not for shojo troupes is because lydian doesn't fall into those traps but instead gets dragged into them.

    everydayy July 31, 2020 11:51 pm
    Yeah but i dont think it's the reason. In shojo troupes the FL mets the Ml and her life is changed for the better. But in this case t's not. Lydian doesn't take things personally and use mostly logic. So she's ... octotooth

    Um ..who tf is Lydian? lmao. Also when I say shojo tropes- I am referring to the tropes where the female lead always ends up being the damsel in distress. You can't introduce a 'physically' strong female character and she gets kidnapped in every arc lol. Idc that she shrugs it off, it's the fact that she's supposed to be physically strong and yet she still gets kidnapped. Saying she gets 'dragged' into those 'traps' would be giving Lindsay too much credit haha

    octotooth August 1, 2020 11:50 am
    Um ..who tf is Lydian? lmao. Also when I say shojo tropes- I am referring to the tropes where the female lead always ends up being the damsel in distress. You can't introduce a 'physically' strong female charac... everydayy

    i don't know how to spell. THe FL being kidnapped is to make the story a kin to romeo and juliet. Torn lovers. FL is a spy so she can absolutely cant fall in love with ML. ML thinks FL is a boy, his presences causes harm to her being kidnapped. It's what how the FL can find logic in attacks and not just says i know ML will save me .