Goodlooking husband wasted

RogueAres August 1, 2020 5:10 am

Sigh, such a waste. The MC is undoubtedly pleasing to the eye but the comments weren't over exaggerating. It really is annoying with the sudden personality change and some outer dialogues need to be inner dialogues. The MC narrates too much too Nooo such a waste of handsome MC.

Responses
    demon13o August 20, 2020 1:48 pm

    Don't forget the missing information that could be useful to us the reader.