The main couple

imjayhime August 1, 2020 7:50 am

I love them; they’re so cute (≧∀≦) everybody’s talking about ch6, but it was honestly my least favorite lol the plot twist was so random & sudden that it made me laugh

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    OmegaChan August 16, 2020 8:22 am

    I was just sitting there, confused... like I really liked the story up til then but suddenly having the seme drop that time travel bomb was too much.. Especially for a one shot... u can't do something like that in such a short story for such a concept u need more pages, more time to develop and explain to make it really come across

    imjayhime August 17, 2020 10:10 pm
    I was just sitting there, confused... like I really liked the story up til then but suddenly having the seme drop that time travel bomb was too much.. Especially for a one shot... u can't do something like that... OmegaChan

    Exactly!! I completely agree