I think the story's nice but the dialogue's not that good or just how it flows. But yeah, I'll be keeping this for more updates.
i think that's a translation issue. i would love to help them with Proof reading but god i hate giving those long tests lol. I'm lazy af.
Hahaha! You can do it! ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
I think the story's nice but the dialogue's not that good or just how it flows. But yeah, I'll be keeping this for more updates.