The art is beautiful but it's also flat, idk if I make sense, everything is pretty but pre...

Kyuu August 2, 2020 8:46 pm

The art is beautiful but it's also flat, idk if I make sense, everything is pretty but pretty does not equal hot sex scenes.

the story is also a mess.

All in all a waste of beautiful art.

You need a better editor author san.

Responses
    KawaiiKitsunee August 2, 2020 8:58 pm

    I agree!!! That art was something else but the story? So rushed and all over the place, their first time could of been something super special but nope- ruined.

    Biha August 2, 2020 9:23 pm

    I meant to dislike

    UnassortedMess August 2, 2020 10:26 pm

    yesss..hate the story.. n its low key feel pedophilic as well..

    Kyuu August 2, 2020 11:16 pm
    I meant to dislike Biha

    Really need to work on that aim yo, you misclicked 13 times.

    Biha August 2, 2020 11:25 pm
    Really need to work on that aim yo, you misclicked 13 times. Kyuu

    Don’t care but thanks for counting