Rather than saying that the story is getting boring, i just think that the author is using...

Sofia August 8, 2020 11:09 am

Rather than saying that the story is getting boring, i just think that the author is using too much chapters for one event. Like,the fight at the party with the countess and then Reas defending Calliope and then them talking took like what? 5-6 chapters? The newspaper part already took 3 chapters.I don't think people find it boring either,people would be ok with the same amount of content if it was all in 1 or 2 chapters.Waiting one month for 1 little event of thw story it's what is tiring people out

Responses
    CrimsonSeeker August 8, 2020 11:17 am

    True. I keep forgetting what was in the previous chapter and have to reread again.

    Reardoor August 8, 2020 12:23 pm

    I do think you’re right. I do seem to forget too and I don’t think it boring. In any other story I would really dislike how long its taking to get to the actual plot, but they somehow still make it interesting and fun to read. I do think it would be nicer shortened/more direct chapters
    and help people no be bother by the wait if there were more major plot point instead of clues or side stories. It is the best example I can think of drawing things out longer then needed without driving’s off readers or being annoying. Its not ideal but still good.